Feedback on magazine advert

I asked people in my year for feedback on my magazine advert and here's what they said.

Rhianon- She said she like that it was simple and not too overwhelming. She said she also liked the colour of the writing in red as it was bright and made the advert more eye catching to the audience. Another thing she said that she liked was the quote as it was short and straight to the point which made you want to read it.

Katie- She said that she liked the font of "Join The Club" as she said it suited the genre of the music. However she did say that the font of the website should be the same as the font of "Lucy Spraggan" so I will consider changing it for my final draft.

Adam- He said that he likes the image that I used because it drew your attention to the image.